LISTEN GIRL

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Thank you for taking the time to read my words...Feel free to comment and offer advice for ive never taking any classes on writing and this is all natural... Im not really sure how to go about getting my writing published...For ive barely found the courage of sharing it to others...Ive always wrote.. i actually have a few short stories...but this is what has starting flowing out of me in the last few months....I hope you enjoy the words and allow them to talk to you...ive noticed that some have read these poems ive wrote and shrugged their shoulders while others have cried and hugged me afterwards. the one thing that makes my heart thump is when one line jumps out at them...It makes me smile and my heart feels warm...Anyways much love and peace!
shelly

LISTEN GIRL

Listen girl...
Look deep into my eyes...
Realities that stand...
Only reflect the outer surface...
It is up to you as an individual...
To accept or deny....
What you see or what is inside...
The truth radiates...
Loyalties combine...
Your soul must journey...
Before it can reach the next level....
Let me push it to the limit....
Look deeper...
Stop looking at the surface...
Stereotypes don’t make the person.........
Look into my eyes and search my soul...
Be careful not to slip too soon...
Take your time...
People are watching your every move.........
Can you feel my love?
I can sense your confusion.............
Your brown eyes............
Are torching my soul...........
I’m not a part of the mass or alone....
I’m only human....
With natural wants and desires...
I refuse to have a label...
I am me....
That’s all it should be...

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